UC知道初三英语作文 帮忙看看
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Be honest
I think honesty is one of the most important qualities that a person should have.The importance of honesty can be shown in many ways.First of all,an honest person will be reliable and dependable.In addition,if a person always tells lies,no one would like to make friends with him/her.Therefore,someone who is dishonest is usually to be with loneliness.What's more,to be honest,or you will probably be helpless when you meet with difficulty.According to the above,honesty is so important that we should be honest.
纯属自己写的。。大家看看有没有哪里有错。。帮我提出来改改。。
文章的要求是： 题目：Be honest
(1)What's honesty? (2)How important do you think honesty is?
(3)Why should we be honest?
按照现在英语中考的作文要求帮我打打分。。大概写到这样能拿多少。。
I think honesty is one of the most important qualities that a person should have.The importance of honesty can be shown in many ways.First of all,an honest person will be reliable and dependable.In addition,if a person always tells lies,no one would like to make friends with him/her.Therefore,someone who is dishonest is usually to be with loneliness.What's more,to be honest,or you will probably be helpless when you meet with difficulty.According to the above,honesty is so important that we should be honest.
纯属自己写的。。大家看看有没有哪里有错。。帮我提出来改改。。
文章的要求是： 题目：Be honest
(1)What's honesty? (2)How important do you think honesty is?
(3)Why should we be honest?
按照现在英语中考的作文要求帮我打打分。。大概写到这样能拿多少。。
Therefore,someone who is dishonest is usually to be with loneliness.这句这样说不是很好..应该改成.Therefore, dishonest people feel lonely all the time just because of their own dishonesty.
According to the above.不这么说..应该说..according to what i mentioned above.
其他都很好..没有什么别的语法错误..
我在外国.我不知道现在中学生的写作水平怎么样..
但是我觉得很不错了.因为我刚才去看了一个高三学生写的文章..
和你的水平不会差很多..
我觉得算是挺不错的了.
满分多少呢..我告诉我总分我可以告诉你多少分..
1. 应试作文，滥用逻辑联系表达：In addition，Therefore，What's more，According to
2. someone who is dishonest，这是冗词
3. to be honest，这个句型没套用对，应该是be honest，or you will ...
4. honesty is so important that we should be honest 这是废话
总体上还不错，初中就能写这样的英语，不容易啦
如果十分能拿个8分左右吧，总体不错，但是里边有几个地方写的不太地道，比说in many ways，应该表达的意思是许多方面，而这样表达是很多方式。有点不妥。不过总体还是挺好的，在初中生里蛮厉害的