寻找语法错误和用词不当

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/18 13:01:30
During the production activities, there are differences between persons that cause the differences on salaries. There is no doubt that the one who owns the high level of education has a variety of quality and ability, such as foreign cultural acceptance, marketing competition awareness so that he will attain more profits in fierce market competition. To the contrary, these persons who don’t accept good education will be at a disadvantage during the marketing competition and merely obtain slender earning.
多词、少词、语法错误都可以指出~~对比较单一的句型的更改也可以说~~

during the production activities, salaries differ while people differ. there is no doubt that the one with higher education background has a variety of quality and ability --- such as foreign cultural acceptance and competition awareness --- hence, he attains more profits in the fierce competition. to the contrary, those with less education will be at a disadvantage and merely gain slender earnings.

persons 应该是people
There is应该是It is
salaries改成salary

the one 的the去掉
these persons 的改成 people