UC知道帮小弟改下语法错误
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主题：谈住在城市还是郊区的问题
Living in a city or in the countryside , which do you prefer?I believe that almost everyone will certainly choose the first one . In the matter of fact , this is turely.Life in a city may be wonderful and exciting ,and you can do whatever you want.But now, the number of the population in cities come to increase seriously especially Shanghai whose population has reached 1.8 million already.And I think people shuold pay more attention to the countryside. The countryside is enjoyable for people who enjoy living in a rather quiet place.It is not very unconvient and terrible as you image .Just need more time on walking .At least ,you won't see too crowded streets and gear any nosie any more.
如果认为写的不好，不如直接说一下该题写作的大致思路，先谢谢了。
Ir's a hotly debeated topic that living in the city or in the countrycide nowadays.Some people thinke that they can live a mordern life style which is wonderful and exciting.They also argu that they can be whichever they want.
Others,however,hold the opposite view.They reaard linving the city as a unwise choice.For the one hand,the population in the cities are sharply increasing in the dacades,for instace,the population of Shanghai has reached 1.8 million already.For the other hand,countryside often mean favourable circumstances.Although it's a little unconvient,countrydise is more suitable for people to live in .You can spend you time walking,fishing and so on ,to slow down the pace of life and entertain yourself.Last but not least ,you keep away from the crowed street and jarring noise,which you have to tollerate all the day in city.
Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Anway,it's easy to lose oneslfe in the