请帮我看下.这句话有没有语法错误.

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Ms.Zhou tell me. She is your deputy when you annual leave. So I tell her Mr.Wang's initialization password.

事情是这样的"有一个老外他负责他们部门的新员工申请,我一般是把电脑的初始化密码直接告诉他. 但是上周他休年假了,他们部门的一位女士给一个部门主管申请帐号,我把帐号建好后就直接发给了那位女士,当时那位女士说那个老外休年假了,老板让她先代替一下那个老外的工作.等这个老外今天回来,发现我没有把密码发给他,今天一早就发邮件问我.为什么把帐号和密码发给那个女士.
在这里我想表达的意思是, "周小姐告诉我,在你休年假的时候她是你的代理人.所以我把王先生的初始化密码告诉了她."
请高手帮忙给看看吧.谢谢谢谢.

Ms. Zhou told me that she was your duputy during your annual leave, that's why I gave Mr. Wang's initialization password to her.

你应该把时态调整成过去时，因为这是已经发生了的事情。

Ms.Zhou told me that she was your deputy while you were on the annual leave. So I told her Mr.Wang's initializative password.

Miss Zhou told me that she was your deputy when you went on your annual vacation. So I told her Mr Wang's initialized password.

Ms. Zhou asked me to take on your responsibility when you were absent for annual leave. That's why I sent the initialization password to Mr. Wang on your behalf.

Ms.Chou tell me that she will be your agent when you have an annual leave. So I give her Mr. Wang's initialization password.

这么说更简单有理，不要纠缠密码之类的问题，而是：老板说你不在时ZHO是代理：
Ms Zhou told me that her boss asked her to take care of your work while you were on vacation. She applied for this account and I gave it to her.