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The Responsibility of Driving in Beijing
It is accknowledged that Beijing is our capital,it is a very beautiful place to live in .there are also many places of interest.
There are many people living in. So driving a car is becoming more and more common.The drivers must follow the traffic rules to ensure other people' safety.
You also should know something about the road,which way is better for you to choose in order to save time. Everyone should be careful when they're out ,especially the drivers,because they will bring many people in the car.
In my opinion,the drivers should be more friendly to us. We should admire them for their sacrifice,too.

我觉得二楼的第二段这样改比较好
Many people live in Beijing so that driving a car is becoming common more than more.In order to ensure other peoples' safety as well as their own that driver must follow traffic rules.

我觉得楼上写的不错，可是有写语法错误，就那他的改了下，希望他不介意。

The Responsibility associated with Drivi