my father will tell me a story to me this night

my father will tell me a story tonight

把 to me 去掉 ， 重复了

this night 格外非正常， tonight 即可

My father will tell me a story this night. 把 to me 去掉 ， 重复了。

tome去掉

my father will tell a story to me this night

可以！

my father will tell me a story this night

可以！

这句话有两种改法：
1.My father will tell me a story this night.
2. My father will tell a story to me this night.
tell sth. to sb.
tell sb. sth.

Tell me a story.

Tell sb something or Tell sb about something

没有tell sth to sb...