初学英语，每周一篇书面表达．请高人改错!2

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错误百出，想喷就喷．恳请高人像老师改卷一样一一指出语法错误，小弟想以次提高英语水平．谢谢！
HAPPY NEW YEAR
It is December thirty-first,New year's Eve.I stay in our school on the eveing. Because we have a New Year's Day party. All student will
watch it.It's very excite and happy for everybody! At 7:30p.m. performance is start. Song Dance Crosstalk Streetbasketball show and rockband live show. Every program is cool. Students also extremely high! At 10:00 p.m. party is over. From 2008 over is near. 2008 has lots of thing. Happy Bad Proud...
2009 is come. I believe everthing will be allright. Only we hard work. Use love to everthings! Happy new year!

我是英语老师，帮帮你。
HAPPY NEW YEAR
It is December the thirty-first/31st,New year's Eve.I stay in our school in the eveing because we will have a New Year's Day party. All the students will take part in it and watch it.We are very excited and happy ! At 7:30p.m. performance starts. Every program,like singing, Dancing, Crosstalk, Streetbasketball show and rockband live show, is very cool. The students are also extremely high! At 10:00 p.m. the party is over. The forgetful 2008 will become the past. A lots of things happened in 2008. Happy Bad Proud...
A new 2009 is coming . I believe everthing will be all right. We only work hard , Use love to everthing!
Happy new year!
祝你进步！

HAPPY NEW YEAR
It is December thirty-first,the New year's Eve.I stay in our school in the eveing. Because we will have a New Year's Day party. All the students will
watch it.It's very exciting and happy for everybody! At 7:30p.m. performance starts