翻译：我记得你说过你回来的时候要检查我们的英语有没有进步？那你觉得我有没有提高呢？

I remember you said that you would check whether we have made progress in English when you come back.So do you think I have made any progress now?
第一句的从句中一定要用过去将来时

i remember you said you would check our improvement in English learning after coming back,and now do you think so?

I remember you said that you’ll check whether or not our English improved when you back.
Do you think mine improved?

I remember you said after you come back,you will check our english don't or have improvement . well do you think so?

你都知道百度难道不知道GOOLE,打开谷歌的页面，上面有个翻译选项，你可以试下，蛮好用的，下次在想翻译什么就不用再问了。

I remember you said you were going to check whether we had made any improvement in our English after you came back. So now, do you think I have improved?