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fashion shows
my friend have(has,第三人称单数） two admission tickets,he invited me（加个to,invite sb to do sth.) watch this shows together.the fashion shows on sunday(放在hold后,主谓宾结构) hold.many famous models
will come to attend this shows.
today,i see（saw,过去时） the（去掉，人名前不加the) amy.she wore a trendy,yellow.silk skirt and a new ,red plat-form shoes .she also wear(wore,过去时） a silver necklace.she clothes is （are,colthes复数)very elegant,i like her silver necklace,but it maybe very expensive.i see the（去掉，人名前不加the) joe,he had a funny , old .brown hat,he wore two clothes , the first is a black ,checked t-shirt,over it outer was a long, blue,denim jacket. i like his long, blue denim jacket,but i don't like his old, brown hat,it looks old-fashioned.
this year's popular colour is purple, therefore many clothing is purple.many of boys like wear a new ,bule jeans and a big brown polo shirt,many of girl like wear black spotted jacket and a new ,white cotton boots. such clothes