谁能帮我检查下这几句英语有无语误?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/27 23:53:56
“Yes, I was busy yesterday, so I didn't reply you.
I was just kidding by "you got me wired".
I am so sorry. My answers maybe will disappoint you because I am not your classmate, and I don't know which school you studied in. Sorry. I replied your first E-mail, which I considered it as an ad. spam, just for fun. But if you really need a friend which you can talk to, I'm glad to be the one.”

reply to 是一个片词,而且to后面是接事,不是接人
所以你不能用reply you,也不能用reply to you
而要用reply to your email或 reply to the email you sent me

如果你要接人,可以使用answer,可接事和人:
so I didn't answer you sooner或so I didn't answer your email sooner

"My answers maybe will disappoint you because"
maybe 和will不是用在一起. 意思同will和shall不能连在一起使用一样。
改:My answers may disappoint you...
使用may就好,不要再用will。它同样有未来式的意味

"...which I considered it as an ad"
consider后面不能再接it,因为which已经是I consider的受词了,所以你不能再多写一个it。

改:...which I consider as an ad

reply要接to,而且to后面接事物,不是接人

My answers maybe will disappoint you because..改成Maybe, my answers will disappoint you.......

which I considered it as..改成which I considered as.......

改为 reply to you
I replied to your first E-mail, which I considered as an ad.
But if you really need a friend who you can talk to

其他没问题

in 放which school前,其他的初看了下