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A letter to my mother
Dec. 7th
Dear mother,(这里不用我翻译了吧)
I have been good at school.(我在学校待得很好) I often think of you when I go to bed because we always go for a walk before go to bed at home.(在我上床睡觉的时候我有时会想念您,因为在家时我们经常在睡觉之前散步) So I miss you everyday.(所以我每天都想你) Do you miss me?(你想我吗) Why don’t you call me?(为什么你不打电话给我) I’ve got a lot of things to tell you.(我有很多东西要告诉你呢) One of the things is about foreign teacher’s daughter. (其中一件事就是关于外国老师的女儿)Her name’s Skyler.(她的名字叫斯凯勒) She lives in Canada. (她住在加拿大)She comes to our class to learn Chinese and English with me in my class.(她来到我们的班级和我一起学习中文和英文) This afternoon, when it was art and craft class, our class were cleaning the gymnasium. (这天下午在劳技课上,我们班在打扫体育馆)And she did it with us too.(她也和我们一起劳动) So I usually talk to her when she doesn’t know what to do?(所以当她不知道的时候我经常告诉她该做什么) But when the class is over, I always haven’t got enough time to talk to her. (但是当下课后,我经常没有足够的时间与她交谈)And I usually can’t find her.(而且我经常找不到她) So