哈利波特观后感请指教

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I fell <<Harry Potter>> is beautiful I like it very much It is different from other movies It is more beautiful than
others harry and his ciassmeats strive together in order to save their school They use their magic to save the magic
world Ifell theyare very fantasic They are the world hero They don't make me letdown Facing their foe they don't
fell afraid Sometimes Iwant to become agood magician But I know Ican't So the <<Harry Potter>> becomes a box of my
dream.

我是初三的英菜,请各位大哥大M们多指教。中英均可。

没有标点看着真费劲 =.=
第一句 我认为哈利波特漂亮 ?精彩可以,漂亮就不太好了吧。
第二句,没问题。
第三句,还是用词不当。
第四句,没太大问题,有一点点偏题。
第五句,他们fantastic?你不觉得用词不当吗?人怎么能说精彩呢?
第六句,语法是不是错了=.= 我觉得应该是 they are the hero of the world.
第七句,let down 就是使某人失望了,没必要加make。

哈利波特的故事庞大,情节曲折,环环相扣,作者处处埋下伏笔,读起来引人入胜。同时对人物的刻画非常生动。每一个人都有自己的优点,缺点,个性。围绕着关于爱的主题,读起来也十分温暖人心。没有人能拒绝这本书的魅力。

看完哈利波特后,我觉得十分激动,因为哈利波特它融合了现实与虚幻,在哈利波特中,扫帚可以骑,食物可以凭空出现,马可以飞,鬼魂会与你到招呼...
哈利波特激励了我读书的欲望,让我觉得读书也是有乐趣的,也提高了读书的水平。

强~