急啊！！if i were a father英语作文

If i wear a father,
i will make my kids love me so much,
always show them my best side,
teach them to be a good person,
the first step is to be helpful,
think that to help others is our happiness
from deep in our hearts.

i will take them to go out every weekday,
let them to see how is this world,
it is so important for they growing up.

what i wish is my kids grow up with love.

were。。。。
怎么不是if i am a father
晕死 怎么是过去时