UC知道帮忙改一下英语作文~
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Making Every Day Earth Day
nowadays,the enciroment of earth becomes more and more badly.Many trees have been cut down(它貌似是不及物的吧…是不是不能这么用…)and many rivers have been polluted.Therefore,we are living in a terrible earth.
Even though,people make a Earth Day to remind us to protect our earth.We don't use the plastic things which pollute our earth and also plant some trees in the Earth Day.However,it is not enough .We must call for all the people to treat everyday as th Earth Day.Everyday everyone can care for our earth. So let us to every day Earth Day!
帮忙改改错……顺便打个分数~满分20，按高考水平来打就可……
谢谢！！
nowadays,the enciroment of earth becomes more and more badly.Many trees have been cut down(它貌似是不及物的吧…是不是不能这么用…)and many rivers have been polluted.Therefore,we are living in a terrible earth.
Even though,people make a Earth Day to remind us to protect our earth.We don't use the plastic things which pollute our earth and also plant some trees in the Earth Day.However,it is not enough .We must call for all the people to treat everyday as th Earth Day.Everyday everyone can care for our earth. So let us to every day Earth Day!
帮忙改改错……顺便打个分数~满分20，按高考水平来打就可……
谢谢！！
Making Every Day Earth Day
Nowadays,the environment of earth becomes more and more bad(terrible).Many trees have been cut down and many rivers have been polluted.Therefore,we are living in a terrible earth.
Even though,people make a Earth Day to remind us of protecting our earth.We don't use the plastic things which pollute our earth and also plant some trees in the Earth Day.However,it is not enough .We must call for all the people to treat everyday as th Earth Day.Everyday everyone can take care for our earth. So let us treat every day as Earth Day!
有少量语法错误，整体上感觉没有亮点，适当加点精彩句型和词汇会好些。
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