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DEAR WANG HUA,
May I ask you a favour? I am going to take a vacation recently and there will be nobody at home. Would you like to take care of my home and my pet cat SATS? As far as I remember, you have always looking forward to looking after a pet, so I think you will be glad to help me do that. I will give you the key to my home, and you just have to go there and feed SATS and have a look at all the furniture to see if they are in the right place is ok. Thanks a lot.
If you would like to, please write back soon.
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dear Hua Wang,
long time no see, how are you? i have a news to tell you, i will leave for vacation to *** some days later, the most beautiful city in my dream. i'm so excited, i can't wait one second to go there! could you please to take care of my house and kitty SATS? i will send post cards to you!