UC知道My couson Robin is very naughty.
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This holiday,I finish all my homewok,then I go to my grandparents' home.And my couson Robin is in there.He is very naughty.
Firstly,I give he his homewoork——an English exam,but he doesn't want to do it.I say,"You must do it,then you can watch TV for 30minutes."He looks happy,but his exam is too bad:
I pig are vrey cut.(My pig is very cute.)
I love is.(I love it.)
……
Oh ,I'm unhappy.But I let he to watch an English cartoon.He likes cartoons. And I ask he some questions.He cananswer it, I praise he;he can't answer it,I let he reads key with me.
It's noon,I have lunch at here.When I go home,he says"bye!bye"to me in English.
I'm so happy!Because I am a successful teacher!
修改一下
Roubin is in there改成is over there好一点吧？
I let he to watch an English cartoon好象是let sb do sth
I have lunch at here去掉at
上午一位小老师
这个假日，我完成所有我的作业，然后我去家庭我的祖父母的。并且我的堂兄Robin那里。他是非常淘气的。
首先，我给他的作业——an英国检查，但是他不想要做它。我说， “您必须做它，然后您能为30分钟看电视。“他看起来愉快，但是他的检查是太坏的：
我猪非常被切开。(我的猪是非常逗人喜爱的。)
我爱它。
……
噢，我是不快乐的。但是我让他观看英国动画片。他喜欢动画片。 并且我要求他有些问题。他可以回答它，我称赞他; 他不可能回答它，我让他读与我的钥匙。
这是中午，我吃午餐在这里。当我回家时，他说"再见! 再见"对我用英语。 很愉快的上午! 由于我是一位成功的老师!
首先，要注意的是，述说一般上要用过去式
然后，那些 I give he(都是错的，要用第三人称，- him)
This holiday,I finished all my homewok,then I went to my grandparents' home.And my couson Robin was there.He was very naughty.
Firstly,I gave him his homework——an English exam,but he didn't want to do it.I said,"You must do it,then you can watch TV for 30minutes."He looked happy,but his exam result was too bad:
I pig are vrey cut.(My pig is very cute.)
I love is.(I love it.)
……
Oh ,I was unhapp