UC知道请帮我看下下面一封信中的错误,并纠正
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Dear **,
I`m a 14-year-old boy in Chongqing China, As you know,I`m only 14 so that my English is not very good. please forgive my unfluent sentences.(To your surprise, I am in grade 10!!)
I have seen your movie such as <***>,<***>,<***> and so on. I fall in love with them beacause they are very exciting and suit me very much.When I saw your movie, all the things that are unhappy were all forgotten. And also, you look very cool in the movies.
Tell you a interesting thing. In the movie<***>, almost every sences you are in, you wear a hat.I think the hat you wear are all wonderful. so I have my hair cut and buy a plenty of caps in stores. When I wear them in school . my classmates praise it . Then, I am very pround to say:"my inspration is from the man who named ***."
When I am sad , I look at the photos of you. I will be happy.When I am in trouble, I look at the photos o
1 Chongqin,China
2 I'm only 14 so my English is...
3 Please forgive...
4 I am in Grade 10
5 I have seen your movie named ...
6 because
7 they are very exciting and they are just to my tastes
8 When I watch your movie,all the things unhappen will be forgotten.And you look so cool in the movies as well.Let me tell you an interesting thing.
9 you wear a hat almost every scence you show up.
10 I wear them in my school
11 When I am unhappy,I have a look at your photos,then,I turn to be happier.
12 All of these are all because you!It is you whom make me move further!
13 movite power错了，应该是 motivity 表示动力
14 in the world 改成 all over the world 吧，应该感觉会好一点，你用的也没有错误。
15 my power is small 改成 perhaps I am nothing
16 But my passion to you is not small as my body.还是别要了吧，外国人不一定听得懂，而且表述上也有问题
17 But I wll follow and support you all the time！
18 with many fantansy things,and the ...
19 Welcome to you 改成We