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Thank you for read my letter.

When I learn German in College of International Studies Sichuan University, my teacher told me that the University of Würzburg was founded in 1402, and is thus one of the oldest universities in Germany. With its numerous special research projects, graduate colleges, research groups and research centres focusing on various areas of the natural sciences and the arts, the University of Würzburg is one of the most successful universities in Germany today.As other traditional universities, liberal arts and medical science have a long history in University of Würzburg.The language of education is famous all around the world.The University Library, a large refectory and brand-new university sports facilities are to be found here.

I am crazy about the architecture of Germany.German are friendly and precise and I want to exchange ideas with them.I hope that I have lucky enough to accepting education here. This is an excellent opportunity to

第一段：
1 read->reading
2 learn->learned;Sichuan前面+个逗号或者of
5 sciences->science;natural science和arts前面都不加the
8 the language of education->the education of language
10 最后一句改成：And the university has a magnificent library, a large refectory and brand-new sports facilities.
第二段：
1 precise后面+个逗号
2 have->could be;accepting->be accepted to have;here->there
第三段：
1 contact->contacted;interest->am interested
2 talk about->was concerned with
5 learning a language->language learning
7 to learn->learning,前面+so
8 of my understanding of->to understand
9 in->on

前面的数字表示那一段的第几行

reading 第一段

I hope that I have lucky enough to accepting education here.
I am lucky

and I interest in differences between
I am interested in

So my graduation thesis talk about it
talks about
没啥大问题，我觉得写的挺好的

抱歉.