请改错：Last Sunday ,we had a hiking . We went hiking at 8:00 in the morning.

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There are fifteen students in our team. We went to the forest. We saw a rabbit and a horse. We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon. We were happy .

Last Sunday ,we had a hiking . We went hiking at 8:00 in the morning
改为Last Sunday ,we had a hiking . We got start at 8:00 in the morning
觉得更好一些，此外There are fifteen students in our team. We went to the forest. We saw a rabbit and a horse. We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon. We were happy .语态不要杂，第一句话改成There were fifteen students in our team.表示过去那个队伍。其他的还好，没有什么错误。

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