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As everybody loves raymond friends is also American classical sitcom lt's talks about 6 persons story.They are Rachl Monica Ross Chandler Phoebe and Joey,from 1994 to 2004 over 5300 millon people saw it,even now people who loves sitcoms see it too.As a famous sitcom on the one hand friends tell us how to be a good person like care of others Support and respect it's very important for us grow on the other hand people in friends has no bad idea sometimes they play on words [ugly naked man]except us people who study in college use it to improve their english ability
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文章写的不错，有点小error.
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Like Everybody Loves Raymond, Friends is also a classic American sitcom.
It tells the real-life story of 6 friends, Rachel, Monica, Ross, Chandler, Phoebe and Joey.
From 1994 to 2004 over 5300 millon people saw it, even until now，sitcom fans still loves seeing it.
As a famous sitcom, Friends, on the one hand, teaches us how to be a good person who cares, supports and respects others, which it's very important for us learn in our actual life.
On the other hand, people in Friends has no bad idea.
Sometimes they are humorous with words,for instance, the ugly naked guy, so it's a classic not only and useful for us who love to enjoy the sitcom, but also for college students who can improve their english by watching it.
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还行，反正我没挑出毛病