but due to his want to make his family live better

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but due to his want to make his family live better
这句话有错么?请大家指点下`谢谢~

你是想说 但是因为他想让家人生活好点吧?

应该这样

But because he wants his family to live better

want改为wanting
因为due to后要加名词性的东西

改为 his wants 应该是“但是由于他的梦想是他的家庭生活的更好”