一篇关于生病的英文短文 帮帮忙！

你应该告诉是哪个年级的短文啊~~~还有要用第几人称啊~~~还有字数是多少~~

我按第一人称写了~~
如果是小学的：
Today I didn't go to school.I was ill.I called the phone to my teacher,and then I saw doctor with my mother.
In hospital,the doctor asked me some questions.
Next,he gave me a bottle of medicine and a cup of water.
He said I was fever,I must stay in bed for two days.
I should drink a lot of water.

如果是初中的：
Today, I felt my body get very uncomfortable and I felt shivered.I knew I should be sick, I had to call my teacher, please a half-day off and went to the hospital.
In hospital, the doctor gave me a detailed inspection, asked me some questions, then gave me a bottle of medicine and a cup of water to drink, and told me the medicine to eat twice a day. I thanked the doctor and went home.

I did not sleep well during the night as my body temperature was very high. When I got up in the morning, I knew I had fallen ill.

The very first thing that I nee