请帮我看看有需要改的地方吗？英文~谢谢

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I worked as a teacher assisttant. My duty is to take care of the kids in school. Most of them are 4-year-old and some are too young to have meals by themselves. I need to feed the younger ones, but also to prevent naughty kids from acting up again and again. Moreover, I have to help kids get undressed and do some cleaning after meals.It is required that I should have strong responsibility and patience towards the kids. And I tried my best to do my work well.From this volunteer work,my responsibility is strengthened.

I worked as aN assisttant teacher in a kindergarten(幼儿园). My duty was to take care of the kids about 4 years old and some of them were too young to have meals by themselves. I need not only feed the younger ones, but also prevent the naughty kids from making trouble again and again. Moreover, I had to help the kids take off and put on their clothes and did some cleaning after meals.It required my strong responsibility and patience towards the kids. And I have tried my best to do my work well.From this volunteer work,my responsibility is strengthened.

teacher assistant --> child care assistant
patience towards --> for
my responsibility is strenghened--> i have stronger responsibility.

I worked as a teacher assistant. My duty is to take care of the kids in school. Most of them are 4-year-old and some are too young to have meals by themselves. I need to feed the younger ones, but also to prevent naughty kids from acting up again and again. Moreover, I h