初中以上的人帮忙写下6年级的英语作文

修改如下：
Dear Lisa ，
Hello Lisa !I am your friend ，Jane.
How about you in this new school ?Do you feel very lonely ?I think you have a lot of friends . You are a very outgoing student . Do you have a lot of time to read books ? I know your school is very good . I am very happy in my new school . In the school ,there are many friendly teachers and classmates .We can study together ,paly together and be happy together .
When are you free ? I want to go to your home ! I think it isn’t very difficult .Is it right ?

Your friend
Jane

亲爱的丽莎:
你好,我是你的朋友简.
在新学校你怎么样? 你是否感到孤独? 我想你一定有很多朋友. 你是一个非常开朗的学生。你有很多时间读书吗? 我知道你所在的学校非常好。 我在新学校很开心. 在这里, 有很多友好的老师和同学. 我们在一起学习,玩耍在一起,高兴在一起. 你什么时候有空? 我想去你家看你. 我想这并不是难事,对吗?

你的朋友,
简

I haven't heard from you for a long time.I miss you so bad.

My homework has been so heavy that I have often had to work till midnight.

There have been many exercises in sever