请求改错……

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/21 01:38:32
Everyone in the world may have a unique perspective but common pursuit of love since love has been the most important emotional need in human life.
那么改成这样呢？

Every writer in the world may have a special perspective but common pursuit of love since it has been a major theme in literature.

如果要表达“每个人对爱情都有不同的见解与相近的追求”应该怎样？作为一个topic sentence of a compare/contrast essay这样合不合适？

>>改unique to special……Topic sentence要把所有内容概括在一句里面。如果分开的话……就不会来问了= =thank you though~

如果要表达“每个人对爱情都有不同的见解与相近的追求”应该怎样？作为一个topic sentence这样合不合适？

有点自相矛盾。最好分成两段。
每个人对爱情有相近的追求
All of us are similar in the pursuit of love
每个人对爱情的见解不同
However, our attitudes towards love may be different.

改错：
原句：Everyone in the world may have a unique perspective but common pursuit of love since love has been the most important emotional need in human life.
修改：1)逻辑有问题，每个人的看法都是独一无二的吗？
2）因果关系有问题：因为爱情是最重要的，所以。。。。
3）概念没有证明，直接引用：爱情是最总重要的情感需求，从哪里来的？谁说的？常识？
对于很多人来说，这不是真的。如：老年人，有孩子的母亲，离婚者，宗教人士。

所以，说话不要太绝对。本句子用了3个绝对。每个人，独一无二，最重要

合适

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"Everyone in the world may have a unique perspective but common pursuit of love since love has been the most important emotional need in human life."这句话怎么看怎么像THEME,不是TOPIC SENTENCE.

帮你改改:

although some people have certain perspectives of their own on life, it is common that lov