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A boy is drawing. Teacher see that he draws fish, vegetables, rice and so on. Suddenly, he draws a woman is

cooking, then draws a man is standing in front of the door, next he draws a boy, he is running towards the man."Oh,

what a great family! "the Teacher thinks. BUt the boy holds the black crayon and black the picture that he drawed.

the teacher is stange "What are you doing! "She scream out. "Miss, our electrcity supply has been cut off!" The boy

looks teacher and smils. The truth burst upon on the teacher. She smiles,too.
The boy is quite on the high ropes. He feels happily. huh! Isn't it? The picture is the boy's world. In his world,

he is the master. In his world, he can do the things he want to do. In this black picture, it hides secrets and happiness that only the boy can feel.
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A boy is drawing. Teacher see（sees单三人称） that he draws fish, vegetables, rice and so on. Suddenly, he draws a woman （who一个句子不可以同时出现两个或两个以上的谓语动词，用从句来引导） is cooking, then draws a man （去掉is）standing in front of the（a 第一次出现，不需要特制） door, next he draws a boy （who） is running towards the man.

"Oh, what a great family! "the Teacher thinks.

BUt the boy holds the black crayon and blacks the picture that he drawed.

The teacher is stange（strange） "What are you doing？ "She scream（s） out.

"Miss, our electrcity supply has been cut off!" The boy looks teacher and smils.

The truth burst upon on the teacher. She smiles,too.

The boy is quite on the high ropes. He feels happily（happy或者happiness,快乐还是幸福，但是不能用副词）. huh! Isn't it? The picture is the boy's world.

In his world, he is the master. In his world, he can do the things he want to do.

In this black picture, it hides sec