短文改错,简单的

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对下文标有序号的每句都进行修改,没错的不改
1 One morning i got up early and want to enjoy the fresh
2 and pleasant air so i walked to the nearest park before
3 i arrved i found to my surprised that there were so many
4 people in the park men and women old and young
5 were doing exercise in various way some were runing up and
6 down some were playing chess and sword and some children
7 were jumping and dancing on the ground deeply moved by that
8 i saw i joined in them while chatting with them i realized the
9 advantages of sports especial morning exercises it can keep
10 us health and make our minds clear from then on i decided to do exercise every morning like an early bird.

1. want→wanted
2. before→when
3. surprised→surprise
4. young后面加上who
5. way→ways
6. √
7. that→what
8. 去掉in
9. especial→especially
10. health→healthy

1 One morning i got up early and "wanted" to enjoy the fresh
2 and "the"pleasant air so i walked to the nearest park before
3 i arrved i found to my surprised that there were so many
4 people in the park men and women old and "youngest "
5 were doing "exercises" in various way some were runing up and
6 down some were playing chess and "sworing"and some children
7 were jumping and dancing on the ground deeply "moving" by that
8 i saw i "joining "in them while chatting with them i realized the
9 advantages of sports especial "the"morning exercises it can keep
10 us "healthy" and make our minds clear from then on i decided to do exercise every mornin