英语修改病句在线解答

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I'm the-captain of our school team so with my fellow players we've won several games. There will an important gane next month. But one of the best players in our team told me just that be wouldn't play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make his parents happy 共有10处错 请大家帮帮忙吧

①第一行the-captain 中的“—”删掉，②so改为and
③第二行 But one of the best players in our team just told me that 中just位置换一下，还有，④There will be an important game……⑤它少了一个be，⑥而且game拼写错了，
⑦第三行，be去掉，改为 he；后面变为，⑧His parents asked him to spend more time inpreparing ……
第四行But his parents think go to college is more important 的⑨think改为thought，⑩go换为going，

大概是这样改吧

第一行1. so改and。我是校队的队长 【和】 we've won several games我们赢得比赛没有因果关系。with my fellow players 状语

第二行 2. will后加be。there be句型，怎末可以没有be动词

3. that改now。just now表示“眼下，刚刚”

第三行 4. once改any。句意，他再也不打篮球。once more表示他下一次不能打，但是一次过后还能打。。

5.去掉in。spend ...in（doing）sth

第四行 6. to改for。词组，be sorry for对某人感到遗憾

7. go改going。动名词做主语going to college，因为句子已经有谓语is而且后面 playing sports 呼应

第五行 8. was改is。关键词连词and，前面说了go to college is more 一般时态，那么后面这是一整句话都应该一般时

第六行9. his改their。 a smart boy like their son.their指代his parents'

嗯嗯，好难的……

第一行1. so改a