请别人提出意见的英文怎么说

This is the the business card template for A. Would you like to make any change? I am going to print this version if it's fine to you.

Below is mold of name card sesigned for A. Do you have any opinion ?
if not ,I will print them out according to it.

The following is the calling card designed for A. Do you have some advice? If not, I will print it out by using this version

This the business card model designed for A. Do you want to make any adjustments? If not, I'm going to print it like this.

What do you think of