这句话有语法错误么?这样翻译可以么?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/05 14:46:31
正如您所知的,您2008年11月份寄给我们错误的软管(我们是于09年月收到它的)。
我们现在只有3.5米这种吸料管在库中。您能否寄一些来?
张先生告诉我当你们要寄东西给上海的时候,可以一并将吸料管连同他们的货物一并寄到上海。
请查找附件中的吸料管照片。
As you may know, you sent the wrong hoses to us in November 2008 (We received them in January 2009).
We just have 3.5M of this feeding hoses in stock now. Could you please send any hoses to us?
Mr Zhang asked me that when you send the goods to ShangHai,you can send the feeding hoses with their goods together to ShangHai.
Please find the attached the pictures of the feeding hose.

As you may know, you sent the wrong hoses to us in November 2008 (We received them in January 2009).
We just have 3.5M of this feeding hoses in stock now. Could you please send some hoses to us?
Mr Zhang told me that when you send the goods to ShangHai,you can send the feeding hoses with their goods together to ShangHai.
Please find the attached pictures of the feeding hose.