【英语】请问这些句子语法有没有错误?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/21 22:55:04
原意:
我是一名普通的中国高中学生。尽管在学校也学习英语,但是我的英语学得并不好,所以今后我有用错词的地方还请多包函!最后,希望通过博客认识更多的朋友!

I am an ordinary Chinese high school students. While schools are learning English, but my English is not good, so useful in the future, I also place the word mistake please package letter! Finally, I hope through the blog know more friends!

首先,语法不是很重要,重要的表达方式要让人接受.
I am an ordinary Chinese high school students--I am just a high school student in China--不说什么ordinary,收起这种中式老套,不要动不动就看不起自已--也许是中国的个性从来是被压抑的吧.学生前面太长了,故改成in china后置.

While schools are learning English, but my English is not good, ---用while 又用but,语法错,学校怎么学?是你学,主语错--改成though we are learning En at school ,My English isnt very good.

so useful in the future,--什么意思,突然冒出一句,修饰什么,主语,宾语?

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....改不下去了

I am an ordinary Chinese high school students. While schools are learning English, but my English is not good, so useful in the future, I also place the word mistake please package letter! Finally, I hope through the blog know more friends!