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I am a sanguine,cautious,enthusiastic ,wise and knowledgable girl ,she who treats people with hospitality and kindness,I am responsible ,positive and would love to meet any challenges in any time!!!

I am the kind of person who do things step by step ,full of passion and diligence,good skills in appliance ,I love communicate with people and that is why everybody likes me.

I will obey the law of the country , the rules of the company and the social routine.

I am a qualified talent with basic quality and ability,I will win respect doublelessly if you can give an offer
帮我看看有没有什么语法问题,或者通顺上的~不用翻译中文……

第一行 she 去掉
第二行 meet 最好换成 face
第三行 challenges变成challenge 而且 in去掉
第四行 貌似应该passion,diligence and good skills...
第五行 I love to communicate..

我是个自信,谨慎,热情,博学多才的女孩,待人热心亲切,有责任感,积极向上,随时等待新的挑战!

我是一个做事按步就班的人,满富激情,勤奋努力,操作闲熟,我喜欢与人交流,因此大家都挺喜欢我。

我会尊从国家的法律法规以及公司和社会准则的规定。

我会充份发挥自己的才能,只要您给我提供机会我会给你双倍的惊喜。