初学英语，每周一篇书面表达．请高人改错！3

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错误百出，想骂就骂．恳请高人像老师改卷一样一一指出语法错误，小弟想以次提高英语水平．谢谢！

Mike is a young boy.He study is first middle school. Today he wake up very late. He look at the alarm clock it's 8:00 A.M. School request 7:35 A.M should come.Teacher who will blame he.So he pick up his book bag and run to the school. But when he come to school.
He fand find today is Sunday no school......
So everybody should have a good Time concept. It's a good bababit.

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Mike is a young boy.==>Mike is a boy.
(boy本来就young,重复!)
He study is first middle school.==>He is a student of the First Middle School.(原句表达模糊,有语病)
Today he wake up very late.==>This morning he woke up very late.(注意时态)
He look at the alarm clock it's 8:00 A.M.==>He looked at the alarm clock ,it's 8:00.(注意时态)
School request 7:35 A.M should come.==>School starts at 7:35.Everyone should be on time.(语意表达混乱)
Teacher who will blame he.==>The teacher will blame who is late!(同上)
So he pick up his book bag and run to the school.==>So he picked up his schoolbag and ran to school!(注意时态)
But when he come to school.
He fand find today is Sunday no school...... ===>But when he came to school,he found nobody there.It was snuday!(时态和表达,到位即可)
So everybody should have a good Time concept. It's a good bababit.(还可以,不错!)