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After nearly 3 or 4 mouth basketball practice, in 12th of February our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS. It is a different experience to me; I had never play basketball before and also had never gone to Mongolia before. So everything for me was just very interesting.
The day before we went to Mongolia, I heard a lot of people said that Mongolia was very cold and about minus 30 degrees, so I brought a lot of warm jacket, it is actually very useful. In the morning of 12th of February we went to china airport, but unfortunately the flight was delay, so we just stay at airport hotel for several hours. If we knew the plane was going delay, we could just finish that day’s classes then went to airport.
Finally we got Mongolia; it was freezing cold and was snowing. We went to international school of Ulaanbaatar which was the school hosted ACAMIS, our host family pick us in the school. My host family is Indian, they were very nice and kind to me and I was really like my host family

After nearly 3 or 4 months basketball practice, on February 12, our team went to Mongolia for ACAMIS. It was a different experience to me. I had never played basketball before and also had never gone to Mongolia before. So everything for me was just very interesting.
The day before we went to Mongolia, I heard a lot of people say that Mongolia was very cold and about minus 30 degree, so I brought a lot of warm jackets, they were actually very useful. In the morning of February 12, we went to China Airport. But unfortunately the flight was delayed, so we just stayed at airport hotel for several hours. If we knew the plane was going to delay, we could just finish that day’s classes before going to airport.
Finally we got Mongolia; it was freezingly cold and was snowing. We went to international school of Ulaanbaatar which was the school who hosted ACAMIS, our host family pick us in the school. My host family are Indian. they were very nice and kind to me and I liked my ho