UC知道找错误（英文对话）
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A: Hello!Is Tim at home?
B:Oh,he isn't here,he is out.Who's that?
A:I'am lily.I want ask him some questions.
B:Can I help you ?
A:Yes,thanks.I'll leave a message,you can give him when he comes back.
B:Please wait a moment.Let me write it down. ... Please tell me what you'll tell him.
A:Please tell him give me a phone back when he comes back.
B:What's your number?
A:My number is 6598412.
B:Got it.I'll tell him .
A:Thank you.Goodbye.
B:Bye-bye.
这是我提问的答案，请大家找找有没有错误，如果没有我明天就拿去上英会上用了
B:Oh,he isn't here,he is out.Who's that?
A:I'am lily.I want ask him some questions.
B:Can I help you ?
A:Yes,thanks.I'll leave a message,you can give him when he comes back.
B:Please wait a moment.Let me write it down. ... Please tell me what you'll tell him.
A:Please tell him give me a phone back when he comes back.
B:What's your number?
A:My number is 6598412.
B:Got it.I'll tell him .
A:Thank you.Goodbye.
B:Bye-bye.
这是我提问的答案，请大家找找有没有错误，如果没有我明天就拿去上英会上用了
I want ask him some questions. want后加一个to.
Please wait a moment.Let me write it down. ... Please tell me what you'll tell him.
最好变一下说法
可以改成 Hold on please. ...OK, go ahead please.
tell him give me a phone back when he comes back.
把phone改成call
去掉back 同时tell后加一个to
其实如果地道一点的话B问完can i help you 后
A直接就可以说please tell him to give me a call as soon as he comes back.
然后接下边的就差不多了
第三行的want ask应该是want to ask I'am好像应该是here is
第五行what you'll tell him好像改成you want to好点吧
第四行的I'll leave a message 感觉有点别扭
here最好该为home;
I'am lily最好该为It's lily;
I want ask最好该为I want to ask ;
you can give him最好该为 you can give it to him;
tell him give me a phone 最好该为tell him to call me a phone .
A:I'am lily.I want(to) ask him some questions.