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Dear Bob:
How are you? Today is Sunday.
It's time for have a rest!My grandparents are singing together, because the song is too old, i could not know the name of the song.
And father is reading his newspaper in the sofa, i think he is very comfortable.In the kitchen, mother is cooking some delicious food for us.And my sister Lisa is running after a cat,she want to catch it.
How a happy family we are.
yours , Sonia

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Dear Bob.
How are you? Today is Sunday.And my family are all doing their own things now.My gradnpa and grandma are singing though they are kind of old.My mother is cooking for us in the kitchen.She cooks very well.And my father is reading newspaper no.It's one of his hobbies.My sister is running after a cat,she always likes to play with the cat.What a happy family we are! Do you think so?
yours,Sonia

Dear Bob.
How are you? Today is S