请帮我找找有什么错误的地方

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/21 15:58:58
Well life is a process of learning. Since we were birth to the death , during the process , we build ourselves then improve ourselves by what we have learned , indeed , building oneself is the most important in one’s life I think .
A well-building man can make a great contribution to the social , to help the society make progress.

Good life is a process of learning. Since we were born to the death , during the process , we build ourselves then improve ourselves by what we have learned , indeed , building oneself is the most important in one’s life I think .
A well-building man can make a great contribution to the society , and help the society make progress.这是什么东西，读起来怪怪的

估计是英语考试改错吧？