初学英语,每周一篇书面表达.请高人改错!4

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Now is spring.But this days is very cold.It's raining cats and dogs outside! Sky is all of the cold black cloud. Weather is very stranger.
Today is monday I woke up in 7:00. school starts at 7:30.If not quickly i will late.
I go to school by motorcycle. Because not text. Sky still is black
But raining day easy to block up.When i came to school.Rain drenck my all body. It's cool days...
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Now is spring.(太中式了)But this(复数) days is very cold.It's raining cats and dogs outside! Sky is all(full) of the cold black cloud. Weather is very stranger(词性错误).
Today is monday (这是两句话)I woke up in 7:00. school starts at 7:30.If not quickly(语法错误) i will late(语法).
I go to school by motorcycle. Because not text.(看不懂) Sky still is black
But raining day easy to block up.When i came to school.Rain drenck my all body. It's cool days...

Spring has come but the weather is rather bad. It is very cold. What is worse, it’s raining cats and dogs outside! Black cloud covers all of the sky. How strange the weather is!
It is Monday today but when I woke up it was 7:00 already while the class begins at 7:30! If I was not quick enough I would be late!

It is spring now ,but the weather of this days was very cold , It is cats and dogs outside now , the sky is covered by dark cloud.The weather is not fine.
Today I woke up at 7 :00 .but the class i