求助 英语改错

下面有5个句子，每个句子都需要改错
最好能把改过来的句子翻译一下，也把改错的地方标明出来

1.Shizuoka,Dr.Hidetaka Kamimura's birth place , lie in central Japan.

2.Arlys Dockendorff , 52 , the photographer from lowa , likes to photograph interesting people .

3.Most members in the family , particularly Petrizzi's husband Roberto and her , are fond of traveling .

4.The fact which in English-speaking countries given names are first and family names are last bothers ZHANG Yin a lot .

5.Guided by the belief the personal computer would be a valuable tool on every office desk-top and in every home , Bill Gates and Paul Allen began developing software for personal computers .

1.Shizuoka,Dr.Hidetaka Kamimura's birth place , lie in central Japan.
lie改为lies
Shizuoka ，Hidetaka Kamimura博士（大夫）的出生地位于日本中心。

2.Arlys Dockendorff , 52 , the photographer from lowa , likes to photograph interesting people .
a.photograph改为take photos of
Arlys Dockendorff 52岁，来自lowa的摄影家，喜欢给有趣的人照相。
b.interesing改为to interest
Arlys Dockendorff 52岁，来自lowa的摄影家，喜欢摄影来使人们感到有趣。
3.Most members in the family , particularly Petrizzi's husband Roberto and her , are fond of traveling .
her 改为she(因为是主语)
家里的大部分成员，尤其是Petrizzi的丈夫和她本人，喜欢旅游。
4.The fact which in English-speaking countries given names are first and family names are last bothers ZHANG Yin a lot .
which 改为that(同位语从句)
讲英语国家里的把名字放在前面，把姓放在后面的做法使得张因感到很麻烦。

5.Guided by the belief the personal computer would be a valuable tool on every office desk-top and in every home , Bill Gates and Paul Allen began developing software for personal computers .