帮忙翻译，小女子有急用，需当日译成~~~

上面翻得都还不错，只是有些句子翻译太逐字而不太符合英语习惯，而且显得罗嗦。

This paper is aiming to enhance the risk management abilities for commercial banks in both theoretical and practical ways. It starts with fundamental theories of bank risk management and then introduces the risk classifications and risk management development histories. Followed with the investigation on issues in risk controlling of China’s banks, the advanced international experiences are analyzed. At last, suggestions and strategies of risk management for China’s banks are proposed.

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this article takes the method of the combinaing theory with practise as a ruslt for promoting risk management of the commercial banks.First we should be recognize the basic theory of risk management of the commercial banks,then classify to them and introduce the process of risk management of the bands.Based on this,we should research the risk management of the commercial banks in mutli-round.
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