英语作文!!~~~~

英语作文!!~~~~
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我的作文水平很差,但是我想学好!~希望英语高手们帮我批改!!~尽管讲出我作文的缺点!!~~谢谢!!!!!!!!

Nowadays,everyone can sets up the personnal Web Site if some basic computer skills.however,a good browser helps to mades a good ability that increase the web for rejects the virus.If you interested for this that sets up a good web site , you should care for colour.And it is essenly to do that used the proper words and web~s details.Finally,you should make sure the web site clear or not. 我想表达的意思是:现在,每个人都可以建立自己的网站,只要具备一些操作技巧.然而,一个好的可以抵抗病毒.如果你有兴趣去建立一个网站,那么你必须具备:懂得运用颜色的调配,运用一些适当的词语和需要表达清晰~ 我感觉好象不会用排比句,,就好象~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~懂得运用颜色的调配,运用一些适当的词语和需要表达清晰~~~~~~~~~~渴求高手指点..教我作文,,我作文很差............................

Nowadays,everyone can sets up the personnal Web Site if some basic computer skills.however,a good browser helps to mades a good ability that increase the web for rejects the virus.If you interested for this that sets up a good web site , you should care for colour.