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When I was a little baby,I had many friends.They played with me and we had a good time.
Now I become a student in junior high school.In my class,I have many good friends.Such as Mu,Wang,Yan and Wang.They're very friendly and we study English from each other.It can improve us to learn better.
When you 're down,friends lift you up.When you lose your way,friends guide you and cheer you on.
So make friends are very useful.Don't forget make friends in anytime.
题目为friendship

1.When I was a little baby(baby是指婴儿，不是儿童的意思。baby改成boy.)
2.They played with me and we had a good time(最好改成They played with me and we used to have a good time.)
3.They're very friendly and we study English from each other.It can improve us to learn better.(they are very friendly to me and we learn english from each other which can improve our english level/which can make us learn better.后面可以用个非限定性定语从句，而且improve 或learn better 只选一个就好，要不然就有点语义重复了。）
4.cheer you on.(前面写的很好，cheer on 意为鼓励，这里也对。觉得cheer up 更好一点。）
5。So make friends are very useful.Don't forget make friends in anytime.（前一句要用动名词作主语，所以make 改成making.后一句forget to make friends)

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When I was a little baby,I had many friends.They played with me and we had a good time.
Now I become a student in junior high school.In my class,I have many good friends.Such as Mu,Wang,Yan and Wang.They're very friendly and we study English from each other.It can improve us to learn better.