初学英语，每周一篇书面表达．请求改错！5

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Evebody have hobbys.Somebody like collect old cars.Somebody collect models......I am a electric guitar player.Electric guitar is very different than to acoustic guitar. Amplifier and effect pedals for sound is very importent. So many guitar fans not train tricks. Only buy lots of equipment. Want to let hims sound become sweet. As a matter of fact this guy is played by equipment. Not play equipments.
So we should become weselfs master.

参考改正格式：http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/80390259.html

谬误不少....
Everyone has his own hobbies. Some like collecting old cars and some like collecting models. I am fond of playing electronic guitar. And it is very different from an acoustic one. Amplifier and pedals play important roles in round effects. So we don't play tricks with them but just get lots of practice with all the equipments in order to make it play better. After all, one has to be playing with a guitar not just play it.
提示：注意时态、人称形式，这些因素是老外在口语当中也很重视的
时间关系，我没办法帮你解释太详尽
额外建议：在你的基础还没太扎实之前，不要轻易尝试自己写太难的文章，不然会使得你的中国式英文表达更熟练
另附
哥们，学外语，最重要的是有兴趣，老对着书本你肯定犯困，看双语字幕电影学最实在了
给你几个理由
第一，老外编剧写的台词，每个字都精确斟酌，保证语法语意通畅，要想学好外语，首先得保证学习资料的质量，总是拿半桶水的国人同胞自己写的那些蹩脚英文，你将永远只会说中国味的外语
第二，老外专业配音演员的口音，保证纯正地道，切音调，语速，语气变化丰富，适合模仿，便于训练听力，想想看，老外的吵架你都能轻松听懂，还在乎国人配音的慢速磁带么
第三，老老实实一句句抄写台词，即可以加强记忆，也能锻炼英文书法，还可以训练速记
第四，摘抄下来的台词，勤勤恳恳的每天抽时间背记，可以尝试结合影片情节记忆，效果相当好，要知道，你在记的正是老外每天在说的话，就好像我们生活在真实的国外环境当中一样
第五，常找人操练英文，百度HI或MSN都有，即便只有文字交流的机会，也要珍惜，顶多边打字边动嘴巴