一篇很简单的英语作文帮我看一下有没有语法错误
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This story is my imagination.If it is similar to have,be sheer the coincidence.Thank you.
I went to a camp (camp 是名词,应该用went to)
we talked about ghost stories near to our tents。(ghost
story 是鬼故事,应该将鬼故事, 所以用 talked about)
that’s UFO 不是 a UFO。
we looked upward。
said with a low voice
near us: next to us 更好一些
got out: came out
i'm afraid: i'm scared 是我很害怕的意思,不应用afraid
widely open 语法 形容词
应该用woke up,要用过去时态
总的来说,不错! 加油!!
有个小问题,said lowly不是表示小声的说,要用said with a low voice
还有,应该用woke up,要用过去时态。
Last summer,I went on a camp to the mountains with my classmates.we were telling ghost stories next to our tents at around 7 o'clock in the evening.Suddenly,Wang Jingjing said,"Listen!I've heard something unusual!"We stopped to listen but heard nothing."That's a UFO!"Gong Ying shouted.We looked up.A big bright thing soon landed near us.Two aliens got out of the UFO."What should we do?"Huang Yaxi asked."I'm scared."Lan Chenxi said in a low voi