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Dear colleagues:
Hello!
Thank you very much during the busy schedule to reading my cover letter, I hope you can bring a surprise, My name is ***, studying at the ***, my education is undergraduate and professional electronics and information science and technology, Aged 24-year-old. In June 2007 I graduates form the University, I recommend myself to your company with sincere, hopeing to join the groups of your company, to achieve self-life, apply what they have learned and for the company's development,I will do my best.
I study at electronic technology of all professional courses during the four years, familiar with the theory of commonly used analog and digital circuit and its applications, mastering the professional software AutoCAD、MaxPlus-Ⅱ、PROTEL, and the other hand of computer hardware and software for a considerable understanding and I can independent handling of PC hardware and software fault , The network knowledge I
问题很多额。。哥哥。。我直接帮你改了
Cover letter
Dear colleagues:
Hello! Thank you very much for reading my cover letter during the busy schedule. I hope you can have a surprise. My name is ***, now studying at the ***. I am an undergraduateand（你的意思是你是本科生吧？其实外国人没有本科生这种说法，可能会不懂你的意思）,and I am studying professional electronics and information science&technology, 24 years old(24-year-old只能做定语，不能做表语）. In June 2007, I graduated from my university. I recommend myself to your company with sincereness, hoping to join the groups of your company and achieve my life goal. I will make the best of what I have learned and, for the company's development, I will do my best.
I studyed electronic technology of all professional courses during the four years, familiar with the theory of commonly used analog and digital circuit and its applications. I have mastered professional softwares such as AutoCAD、MaxPlus-Ⅱ、PROTEL. On the other hand ,I have a considerable understanding of