UC知道检查一下我的英语作文，提点意见
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Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, Others want to be famous. I have a lot of dreams,too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a musician like Beethoven in future. So I learned the piano very hard.
I think music is very relaxing. Beethoven was a great musician.I like him very much .A little difficult to learn the piano, but very interesting.
I belive i can become a musician.
帮忙检查一下有无语法错误，用词错误或是病句。我要进行演讲，大家能否提点建议，没经验
I think music is very relaxing. Beethoven was a great musician.I like him very much .A little difficult to learn the piano, but very interesting.
I belive i can become a musician.
帮忙检查一下有无语法错误，用词错误或是病句。我要进行演讲，大家能否提点建议，没经验
1. in future改成in the future(in future一般用在带命令口气的祈使句里）
2.learned piano改成learned to play piano
3.倒数第二句最后一行A little difficult to learn the ....在最前面加It's (It's a bit difficult to play the piano well,but I think it interesting to have a try.)
另外，楼上的，你算什么英语老师啊？混饭吃啊？
总之，你写得还算不错的
好！写得很好！！！没有语法错误
相信我 我是高中英语教师
兄弟 厉害啊
Everybody has a dream. Be wealthy, be notable, and/or be powerful. I've been had lots of dreams, since I was a little girl. Grow up as a musician as Beethoven was one of my big dreams .....
很好！只有一句错了：
"When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a musician in the future like Beethoven".
OR
"When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a musician, like Beethoven, in the future".
没有"in future"的，是"in the future". It is a common error.