自己写的英文练习，请看看有无语法错误

来源：百度知道编辑：UC知道时间：2024/05/25 14:05:30

Oh ! Human , please watch out . The God gave birth to the earth .Made the human to look after his work . But the human broke out the war which destroied he earth and our goodness . In time , the God was back . He made the dark cloud to block out the light and speaded to anywhere which has war . And then , the plant can`t grow . Hunger made the human stop warring . At last , the human thinking about what they have done before.So, what do you thing what you have done

"Made the human to look after his work . "缺主语，前面加个IT
"the human thinking about what they have done before"缺谓语，THINKING不能作谓语
很多地方说不上语法不对（除了打错的单词），就是整个很奇怪，包括时态
按照ωodeSweEt那样改就变得顺畅很多

Oh ! Human , please watch out . The God gave birth to the earth ,making the humen look after his work . But the humen declared wars on others which destroied earth and our goodness . Just at that moment, the God was back . He made the dark clouds block out the light and spread everywhere where there was a war . And then , the plants can`t grow . Hunger made the human stop wars . At last , the human thought about what they had done .So, what do you thing of what you have done?

保证正确率我把你的用词可能改了一下但是意思没变你原来的说法不对

给你个建议专研下从句宾语从句和状语从句