UC知道帮我修改超简单的小学英语口语稿
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I’m a happy girl， I have many hobbies. Such as: reading, painting, singing. I like to eat meat. But I don’t like fish at all. I like green. And I have many friends.
I’m a good schoolgirl in teachers’ eyes! My school is so nice. I have many teachers. And I like my teachers. Of course, I like English best. I have a happy family. My mother always says to me: oh, you’re a cute girl!
There are______people in my family. My dad is a worker. My mother is a worker too. And I have a a little brother. his name's ______. he always play with me. And I also love him. He is very funny , one day, he always drink water, I ask he:“why do you drink so much water? ” He said : “I have just had an apple! ”I still can’t understand he ,then he tell me: “I forgot to wash the apple!”
This is my family. Do you like us?
That's all. Thank you!
我英语太差，请大家来帮忙修改一下，主要是后面半截啊，逻辑啊，语法啊，不要改难
Good morning, everyone! My name is__________, I’m nine years old.I am studying in MABU school.
I’m a happy girl， I have many hobbies. Reading, painting,and singing. I like to eat meat. But I don’t like to eat fish at all. I like green vegetables. And I have many friends.
I’m a good schoolgirl in teachers’ eyes! My school is so nice. I have many teachers. And I like my teachers. Of course, I like English very much. I have a happy family. My mother always says to me: oh, you’re a cute girl!
There are 4 people in my family. My father is a worker. My mother is a worker too. And I have a little brother. his name's ______. he always plays with me. And I love him very much. He is very funny , one day, he was drinking water, I asked he:“why do you drink so much water? ” He said : “I have just had an apple! ”I still couldn’t understand he ,then he told me: “I forgot to wash the apple!”
This is my family. Do you like it?
That's all. Thank you!
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