UC知道刚写的雅思作文，请给打分并简评，谢谢！
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/10 18:50:29
Topic：Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In all ages, it is always being a well received conception that women should take major responsibility of children rearing, not only because of the child-birth but maternal instinct. Yet, this view seems to be constantly concussed accompanied with the progressive feminism as well as the significance of men in parenting individual coming to realize. In this essay, I would like to talk about the argument and put forward my own attitude.
Undeniably, women do dedicate much more in bringing the children up. However, this is not the only talent god gifts them. A host of successful great women from diverse fields have shown off the truth that there still wait brave new worlds for women to explore, w
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In all ages, it is always being a well received conception that women should take major responsibility of children rearing, not only because of the child-birth but maternal instinct. Yet, this view seems to be constantly concussed accompanied with the progressive feminism as well as the significance of men in parenting individual coming to realize. In this essay, I would like to talk about the argument and put forward my own attitude.
Undeniably, women do dedicate much more in bringing the children up. However, this is not the only talent god gifts them. A host of successful great women from diverse fields have shown off the truth that there still wait brave new worlds for women to explore, w
很强词汇量好大啊，只看得懂，叫我写打死都写不出来，个人感觉有8分，顺便问下你写作怎么练的？还有就是写作词汇量怎样才能提高，发消息给我如果可以的话，谢谢
很不错,用词够简练,在我看来能评93分.
可以吖！韵味出来了，用词很简炼↓82
都不知道你写啥