高手们帮我修改一下这篇港大的申请

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Please write briefly in English on your reasons for applying to study at The University of Hong Kong, outlining the curricula which you are interested in, your career aspirations and any other information you consider relevant. (within 250 words)
请用英文简述报读香港大学的原因, 选择志愿的考虑及对未来的展望或其他相关的资料。(250字内)

The University of Hong Kong is a school that I've longing for. As the introduction says, it is a university of world-class standing. I admire the advanced philosophy of education there, which discussion and cooperation are encouraged. So in that case, not only the exam marks will improve, more importantly, our potential abilities could be dug out, in such kind of atmosphere.
As a physics student and big computer lover, I made Computer Engineering for my first choice because the future age is an age of science, our lives will depends more and more on computers. Also, I'll be enthusiastic on my favourite subject. In my spare time, I learned some theory of computer and c

The University of Hong Kong is the school that I've been longing for for a long time.
As the introduction says, it is a university of world-class standing. I admire the advanced atmosphere of education there, where discussion and cooperation are encouraged.
AS a result, not only the exam marks will be improved, but also our potential abilities can be explored.

As a physics student and big computer lover, I take Computer Engineering as my first choice because the forthcoming era is an age of science and information, and our life will depend more and more on computers.

Moreover, I'll be enthusiastic on my favourite subject. In my spare time, I have learned some theories of computer and computer programming by myself.

I can make some decent programmes in Basic and Visual Prolog without others' help.which made me feel confident and satisfactory.

Sometimes, I'll have some strange ideas like "using the elem